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Wow, this is excellent; really well written, with a great sense of mood (mostly dread). The meaning was heartfelt and resonant.(Minor typo -- I think -- early on "I seem them dotting the landscape".)
Thank you! I'm glad the mood and emotions came through so clearly.
(And thanks for catching the typo! )
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Wow, this is excellent; really well written, with a great sense of mood (mostly dread). The meaning was heartfelt and resonant.
(Minor typo -- I think -- early on "I seem them dotting the landscape".)
Thank you! I'm glad the mood and emotions came through so clearly.
(And thanks for catching the typo! )